Exploring Kishōtenketsu: A Four-Part Storytelling Journey

Kishōtenketsu is a traditional narrative structure emphasizing exposition and contrast over conflict. This exercise will guide you through crafting a story using this unique framework.

Structure Overview

Ki (Introduction)

Set the scene and introduce characters or the setting.

What is the starting point of your story? Who or what do you want to introduce?

Shō (Development)

Build upon the introduction by adding details and depth.

How does the situation evolve? What additional information enriches the story?

Ten (Twist)

Introduce a surprising or contrasting element that shifts the narrative.

What unexpected event or detail can you introduce? How does it contrast with earlier parts?

Ketsu (Conclusion)

Bring the story to a satisfying close by connecting all parts.

How do you resolve the narrative? What overarching theme or message emerges?

Example Stories

The Gardener's Surprise

Ki (Introduction): A man plants a seed in his garden.

Shō (Development): The seed sprouts, and he cares for the growing plant diligently.

Ten (Twist): One morning, he discovers a rare butterfly resting on the plant.

Ketsu (Conclusion): The encounter inspires him to create a butterfly garden, transforming his backyard into a haven for wildlife.

The Silent Pond (Haiku)

Ki (Introduction): An old silent pond.

Shō (Development): A frog jumps into the pond—

Ten (Twist): Splash! Silence again.

Ketsu (Conclusion): The moment captures the serenity and suddenness of nature.

Four-Panel Manga Example

Ki (Introduction): Character A greets Character B in the morning.

Shō (Development): They discuss plans for the day.

Ten (Twist): Character B reveals they have won a trip to an exotic location.

Ketsu (Conclusion): Both characters celebrate, setting off on a new adventure.

"Snow Country" by Yasunari Kawabata

Ki (Introduction): Introduction of a remote hot spring town in Japan.

Shō (Development): Development of the relationship between the protagonist and a geisha.

Ten (Twist): The appearance of another woman introduces emotional complexity.

Ketsu (Conclusion): The story concludes with reflections on beauty and transience.